我与DS的诗歌翻译对比32：史蒂文森创作的儿歌一首

武夷山

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Bed in Summer

In winter I get up at night

And dress by yellow candle-light.

In summer, quite the other way,

I have to go to bed by day.

I have to go to bed and see

The birds still hopping on the tree,

Or hear the grown-up people’s feet

Still going past me in the street.

And does it not seem hard to you,

When all the sky is clear and blue,

And I should like so much to play,

To have to go to bed by day?

夏天的床

史蒂文森

武夷山译，1983年6月30日

冬天起床天没亮，

伴着烛光穿衣裳。

夏天刚好反过来，

天还没黑就上床。

躺在床上真无聊，

鸟儿还在树上跳，

大人还在街上走，

偏要让我睡早觉。

天空晴朗海样蓝，

心痒痒地真想玩。

让我白天就睡觉，

要说多冤有多冤！

2026年3月28日请DeepSeek翻译这首儿歌，答卷如下：

夏之眠

冬日里我夜半起床，

借着昏黄的烛光穿上衣裳。

夏日却截然相反，

我竟要在白日里上床。

我躺上床，却看见

小鸟儿仍在枝头跳跃翩跹，

或听见大人们的脚步声响

依然在街巷经过我身旁。

当天空澄澈湛蓝，

我多想嬉戏流连，

你却要我白天睡觉，

这岂不叫人懊恼？