Xiao Zhang,

Your English is pretty good. If you want to improve scientific writing, you can start with reading English publications. When you read a paper, ask yourself how easy it is to understand it. A well-written paper should do that for readers, because there should be a good logic flow to guide you through.

Please feel free to contact me if you need specific help with writing. I don't know everything, but I am willing to try my best.

Aloha,
Zuojun