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我用黄色标出我觉得“有问题”的地方。你看看“错”在哪里。

（答案在后面） 

Enhanced land–sea warming contrast

elevates aerosol pollution in a warmer world

https://www.nature.com/articles/s41558-019-0401-4

[1] Many climate models simulate an increase in anthropogenic aerosol species in response to warming¹, particularly over the Northern Hemisphere mid-latitudes during June, July and August. 

[2] Recently, it has been argued that this increase in anthropogenic aerosols can be linked to a decrease in wet removal associated with reduced precipitation², but the mechanisms remain uncertain. 

[3] Here, using a state-of-the-art climate model (the Community Atmosphere Model version 5), we expand on this notion to demonstrate that the enhanced aerosol burden and hydrological changes are related to a robust climate change phenomenon—the land–sea warming contrast^3,4. 

[4] Enhanced land warming is associated with continental reductions in lower-tropospheric humidity that drivedecreases in low clouds—particularly large scale(stratus) clouds—which, in turn, lead to reduced large-scale precipitation and aerosol wet removal. 

[5] Idealized model simulations further show that muting the land–sea warming contrast weakens these hydrological changes, thereby suppressing the aerosol increase. 

[6] Moreover, idealized simulations that only feature land warming yield enhanced continental aridity and an increase in aerosol burden. 

[7] Thus, unless anthropogenic emission reductions occur, our results add confidence that a warmer world will be associated with enhanced aerosol pollution.

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Enhanced land–sea warming contrast

elevates aerosol pollution in a warmer world

https://www.nature.com/articles/s41558-019-0401-4

评论：warming contrast是对的，但是，实质是temperature contrast

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[1] Many climate models simulate an increase in anthropogenic aerosol species in response to warming¹, particularly over the Northern Hemisphere mid-latitudes during June, July and August. 

评论：我会用during June---August。

[2] Recently, it has been argued that this increase in anthropogenic aerosols can be linked to a decrease in wet removal associated with reduced precipitation², but the mechanisms remain uncertain. 

评论：这句话与上一句衔接得比较“硬”。我会用This increase has been linked to …

[3] Here, using a state-of-the-art climate model (the Community Atmosphere Model version 5), we expand on this notion todemonstrate that the enhanced aerosol burden and hydrological changes are related to a robust climate change phenomenon—the land–sea warming contrast^3,4. 

评论：我会删expand on this notion to。

[4] Enhanced land warming is associated with continental reductions in lower-tropospheric humidity that drivedecreases in low clouds—particularly large scale(stratus) clouds—which, in turn, lead to reduced large-scale precipitation and aerosol wet removal. 

评论：这里的large scale(stratus) clouds应该用large-scale (stratus) clouds，尤其是后面用了large-scale precipitation。Be consistent!

that drivedecreases in low clouds是定continental reductions，我会用“，which cause decreases in low clouds”。

[5] Idealized model simulations further show that muting the land–sea warming contrast weakens these hydrological changes, thereby suppressing the aerosol increase. 

[6] Moreover, idealized simulations that only feature land warming yield enhanced continental aridity and an increase in aerosol burden. 

评论：我看不懂这个与【4】有什么差别。

[7] Thus, unless anthropogenic emission reductions occur, our results add confidence that a warmer world will be associated with enhanced aerosol pollution.

评论：unless anthropogenic emission reductions occur有点怪，我会用unless we reduce anthropogenic emissions。