任胜利的编辑之家分享 http://blog.sciencenet.cn/u/rensl Email: silei10@sina.com

博文

科技写作(103):时态的使用要妥当 精选

已有 34889 次阅读 2013-1-27 10:55 |个人分类:科技写作|系统分类:论文交流| style, exactly

        科技论文中常用的两种时态是现在时和过去时。一般而言,在表述观察结果、已完成的行为及特定结论时应使用过去时。例如,描述实验结果时要使用过去时,因为实验已经结束,而你的结果尚未成为公认的事实。因此,那些主要涉及你自身工作的内容,如摘要材料和方法以及结论部分都应使用过去时。

C 1

a  Higher temperatures resulted in less bud formation.

b  The three images were taken about 90 minutes apart.

        对于那些普遍认可的概念和观点用现在时表述。已经发表的结果通常被视为事实前言部分要使用现在时,因为其所介绍的是前人构建的知识。

C 2

a  The newly discovered planet is at least as big as Pluto.

b  Most regions where this problem arises belong to category X.

        如果用过去时描述已经发表的工作的结果,则表示你不认为该结果是事实,而仅仅是观察结果

C 3

Sultan observed that certain species of bacteria respond to light stimuli.

        该句描述的是一个已经完成的实验。因此“observed”使用了过去时,然而“respond”却使用了现在时,这是因为这部分句子表述的是事实,是发表过的、已经存在的知识。

        讨论部分是探讨你的工作与前人工作的关系,这部分最难写,因为同时涉及现在时和过去时。记住,通常情况下,展现数据图表时用现在时,描述假说和原理时也用现在时。

C 4

The effect of TXY addition is shown in Figure 5.

      当观察被重复进行或从过去持续到现在,则使用现在完成时。

C 5

X has been of interest for the past three decades.

        只有一种情况使用将来时,就是你的实验计划于将来实施。未来的实验一般不会出现在研究论文中,但会出现在基金申请中。

C 6

We will examine if parallel universes exit.

 

练习:下列各句应使用过去时还是现在时(如果答案不只一个,请解释原因)。

1.       In our study, tree size __________(increase) with reduction of pesticides.

2.       The larva of the monarch butterfly__________(feed) on milkweed.

3.       In our study, we__________(find) that there are significant flattenings of the PES along the reaction Pth with increasing cluster size, as Fig. 5__________(indicate).

4.       In a study by Fermi, the vibrational levels__________(diverge) into the so-called Fermi dyad.

5.       Females of this species__________(have)a unique projection from he dorsal part of the thorax.

6.       Recent work by deValt (2001)__________(show) that nematodes__________(reproduce) readily in the laboratory.

7.       A phagemid construct encoding 2 transgenes in tandem__________(can) be used to transform E. coli cells.

8.       Table 3__________(show) that in our study, polychaetes__________(be) most abundant at depths of 10 to 16 m.

9.       Baumann (1997)__________(find) that this bacterium__________(is) highly sensitive to pH.

10.   We__________(observe) chemoattraction within 30 min of Shh addition.

11.   Identification of restriction factors__________(give) us more knowledge of the host cell restriction system.

12.   Our results__________(suggest) that the Asn5 glycosylation site __________(play) a critical role in the function of the KCEN 1 protein.

13.   We__________(investigate) high-quality single crystals of vanadium oxide.

14.   We__________(do) not observe rods in the diffraction patterns but instead well-defined Bragg spots, suggesting that at least 10 interatomic layers in the surface-normal direction__________(be)contributing to the interferences.

15.   Coupled climate-carbon cycle models__________(suggest) that Amazon forests__________(be) vulnerable to droughts, but satellite observations__________(show) a green-up in intact evergreen forests of the Amazon in response to a short, intense drought in 2005.

16.   The Ka value for β-cellobiosyl (approaching 103 M-1)______(be)comparable to that for many carbohydrate/protein interactions.

17.   Hundreds of species of reef-building corals__________(spawn) synchronously over a few nights each year, and moonlight_________(regulate) this spawning event.

18.   Arctic wind anomalies______(be) part of a global-scale pattern of highly unusual circulation in 2007, the causes of which______(be) as yet unclear.

19.   To map pathways of motion, all observed Bragg diffractions of different planes and zone axes__________(be examine) on the femtosecond to nanosecond time scale.

20.   ABSTRACT: The average translational energy_____(be) significantly lower than expected for the calculated surface temperature.

21.   SUMMARY: In conclusion, we_____(find) significant deviations from the equilibrium behavior in fs-laser induced desorption of CO/Ru.

 

 

参考答案

1. increased

2. feed

3. found indicates

4. diverged

5. have

6. showed reproduce

7. can

8. shows were

9. foundis/was

10. observed

11. gives

12. suggestplays

13. investigated

14. didare

15. suggestareshowed

16. is

17. spawnregulates

18. wereare

19. were examined

20. was

21. found

摘编自《科技写作与交流》(任胜利 . 科学出版社, 2012年出版)



https://blog.sciencenet.cn/blog-38899-656933.html

上一篇:科技写作(102):使用主动语态
下一篇:科技写作(104):句子要简短
收藏 IP: 221.221.19.*| 热度|

22 高英 高建国 文文 朱志敏 虞左俊 李志红 李伟钢 陆泽橼 侯雄坡 文克玲 窦智 王桂颖 吕喆 王枫 崔全顺 张海霞 张冠军 兰朝利 王钰智 徐耀 qiyuansui123 lmshspring

该博文允许注册用户评论 请点击登录 评论 (26 个评论)

数据加载中...
扫一扫,分享此博文

Archiver|手机版|科学网 ( 京ICP备07017567号-12 )

GMT+8, 2024-11-21 19:57

Powered by ScienceNet.cn

Copyright © 2007- 中国科学报社

返回顶部