致谢的对象应是对论文工作有直接和实质性帮助、贡献的人或机构, 因此, 致谢中应尽量指出相应对象的具体帮助与贡献. 例如: 应该使用诸如“We gratefully acknowledge the assistance of Steven Conley in preparing the photomicrographs. We also thank David Hill and Marilee Burrell for preparing the mouse antisera to WAF1.”的表达, 避免诸如“To acknowledge all of the people who have contributed to this paper…”的表述.
要注意选用适当的词句来表达感谢之情, 避免因疏忽而冒犯本应接受感谢的个人或机构. 致谢的开始就用“We thank”, 不要使用“We wish to thank”, “We would like to thank”, 或“The authors wish to thank”等. 尤其是“wish”一词最好从致谢中消失. 当表达愿望时, “wish”是很好的词, 但如果说“I wish to thank Dr. R. Richman” 则是在浪费单词, 并且也可能蕴含着“I wish that I could thank Dr. R. Richman for his help but it was not all that great.”(我希望感谢R. Richman博士的帮助, 但实际上这种帮助并不那么大). 因此, 用“I thank Dr. R. Richman”显得更简明和真诚.
例1: Acknowledgments W. M. and Z. Z. are supported by grant LM05110 from the National Library of Medicine. We thank Dr. Warren Gish for helpful conversations, Dr. Eugene Koonin for assistance with the samples, and Dr. Gregory Schuler for producing several of the figures.
例2: Acknowledgements The authors thank the Natural Environment Research Council (NERC) for supporting this work as part of C. D. PhD work. We also thank Harry Becker, Pierre Schiano and Richard Carlson for their constructive comments during the review process. We are grateful to John Watson for XRF analyses and to Nick Rogers and Fatima Mokadem for ICP-MS analyses. Thanks also go to Jason Harvey and Dan Croucher for their help in the field.
例3: Acknowledgments We thank Drs. D. Morgan and C. Sherr for baculoviruses, L. Connell-Crowley for purified proteins, Dr. J. Shero for Y190, and Dr. H. Piwnica-Worms for baculoviruses and antibodies to cyclin B. We also thank Drs. E. Harlow, S. van den Heuvel, M. Mendenhall, A. Noda, and M. Meyerson for gifts of plasmids and for sharing unpublished data. We thank Dr. R. Sager for providing cell lines and Drs. A. Pardee and J. Smith, in whose lab some of these experiments were performed. We thank B. Kuhlman, R. Richman, E. Swindell, and N. O'Leary for excellent technical assistance. This work was supported by National Institutes of Health grants AG-11085 (to S. J, E. and J. W. H.) and RO1-AG11066, (to J. Smith) by the Welch Foundation (to J. W. H.), and by an American Cancer Society junior faculty award (to J. W. H.).