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Effective Writing, with Examples (4)

已有 3877 次阅读 2010-5-30 05:30 |个人分类:Scientific Writing|系统分类:教学心得| writing, English, Scientific, editing

 
4) Appropriate Use of Conventions
 
a) Adjective and verb confusion
 
Example: His colleagues agree that he does his job good.
 
Correction: His colleagues agree that he does his job well.
 

        b) Pronoun case:
 
Example: He sat between you and I in the meeting.
 
Correction: He sat between you and me in the meeting.
 

        c) Idiom:
 
Example: Dr. Yee had a very high opinion towards her.
 
Correction: Dr. Yee had a very high opinion of her.
 

        d) Comparison of modifiers
 
Example: Of the five posters, I like Dr. Li’s more.
 
Correction: Of the five posters, I like Dr. Li’s best.
 

        e) Sentence fragment
 
Example: Whether or not the answer seems correct.
 
Correction: The answer seems to be correct.
 

        f) Comma splice or fused sentence
 
Example: Ann enjoys reading novels, she reads at least one each week.
 
Correction: Ann enjoys reading novels, and she reads at least one each week.
 


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