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• "As one of popular used geophysical tools, the…"
→ "As one of the most commonly used geophysical tools, the …"
EXPLANATION: "one of …" requires "the" ("one of the …"); before a verb ("used"), an adverb must be used.
"one of …" 后面需要加"the" ;在动词之前,如"used",一定要用副词。
• “…imaging section by the parameter of the secondary differential.”
→ “…imaging section using the parameter of the secondary differential.secondary differential.”
EXPLANATION: use “using” to show what was used to do something. Also avoid using “by using” (the extra word is unnecessary)
使用“using” 以表明某物用来做某事。还要避免使用“by using” ,额外的词是多余的
• “…has more ability to find the most available resolution…”
→ “… can be used to obtain the optimal resolutionresolution…”
EXPLANATION: use proper, scientific verbs and word choice
使用正确的、科学的动词,词语选择要适合于科学表达
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