A

错误：average time

正确：averaging time

approach

Wrong: approach to a Poisson distribution

Right: approach a Poisson distribution

D

用duration，不用lasting time

方位（Direction）的表达

Wrong: in a steppe of northeast Beijing

Right: in a steppe northeast of Beijing

distribution是可数的

Wrong: use Gaussian distribution as a reference

Right: use a Gaussian distribution as a reference

G

Gaussian 做名词时，是可数的

Wrong: (PDFs) be fitted by Gaussian

Right: (PDFs) be fitted by Gaussians

H

高度（Height）的表达

Wrong: at 10 m

Right: at 10 m above ground level

I

increase

Improper: with the increases of $D$, the difference become large

Proper: as D increases, the difference becomelarge    

O

从属（Of）的表达

Wrong: 6 days turbulent data

Right: 6 days of turbulent data

O

用the number of samples，不用thesampling number

S

filled/open symbols，不用black/blank points

T

the

Wrong: a new method is proposed to extract the bursting fluctuations inthe time series

Right: a new method is proposed to extract bursting fluctuations from timeseries

Wrong: such as the PDFs of amplitudes of bursting fluctuations

Right: such as the PDFs of the amplitudes of bursting fluctuations

Wrong: Data used in this paper

Right: The data used in this papert