任老师好!
我是西安交大在读博士,今年第七年还没毕业,很是苦恼,没毕业的主要原因是没有英文sci。2015.01.09给energies投了一篇小论文,但2015.02.12被拒稿了。主编给的拒稿意见如下
This paper is disorganized, after reading this paper, it is difficult to see any theoretical and practical contributions, particularly lacking of providing very convinced relevant literature reviews to indicate the reason why the proposed approach is suitable to be employed to solve the solution of a real-time MPC scheduling model which utilizes storages, i.e., minor contributions to literature. In the meanwhile, it is also difficult to learn how these numerical examples results could be obtained. Authors provide lots of relevant but dis-organized literature reviews, thus, they fail to provide very clear, critical numerical results illustrations and comparisons (discussions).
In addition, authors also fail to provide very details illustrating the procedure how the proposed approach is working in the numerical results section, please provide more clear flow chart with some essential brief explanation vis-à-vis the text to indicate how the proposed methodology going next, i.e., sections 2 to 4 are poor writing, please re-write and re-organize it in a comfortable form. Authors should also well organize to provide very details in illustrating the procedure how the employed approach is working in the experimental results section (i.e., section 4 is saying nothing).
Due to poor application merits and poor organization skills, this paper is difficult to see significant contributions novelty. I think it is immature. I do not recommend this paper to be published. I hope the author will succeed in placing the paper elsewhere.
我现在很是灰心丧气,也不想改稿件,年也没过好。我目前在超星学术视频看您的英文科技论文撰写与投稿,想提高英文写作能力,怕临时抱佛脚,不管用。
我咨询过一些同学,说是英文润色可以花钱请翻译公司来帮忙,也给我推荐了英文翻译公司。我目前困惑是我的文章来龙去脉很模糊,自己没有想得比较清楚,就仓促动笔写scil论文,结构也是拼凑。
我这几天想调结构,弄明白研究的来龙去脉,以及突出创新点。有什么好的方法吗?麻烦老师了,祝老师在新的一年:身体健康,万事如意!