https://link.springer.com/article/10.1007/s00376-017-8089-8

Impacts of the Autumn Arctic Sea Ice on the Intraseasonal Reversal of the Winter Siberian High

评论：标题中，太多the。

Try：Impact of Autumn Arctic Sea Ice on Intraseasonal Reversal of Winter Siberian High

Abstract

［1］During 1979–2015, the intensity of the Siberian high (SH) in November and December–January (DJ) is frequently shown to have an out-of-phase relationship, which is accompanied by opposite surface air temperature and circulation anomalies. 

评论：in November and December–January (DJ) 有点怪怪的。

这里没有必要用被动时态。主语＋frequently showed an out-of-phase relationship [with WHAT?]

难道是：主语＋frequently showed an out-of-phase relationship with surface air temperature and circulation anomalies.

［2］Further analyses indicate that the autumn Arctic sea ice is important for the phase reversal of the SH. 

评论：phase reversal？phase change比较常见。

［3］There is a significantly positive (negative) correlation between the November (DJ) SH and the September sea ice area (SIA) anomalies. 

评论：什么是November (DJ)？between后面的两个the可以不用。

［4］It is suggested that the reduction of autumn SIA induces anomalous upward surface turbulent heat flux (SHF), which can persist into November, especially over the Barents Sea. 

［5］Consequently, the enhanced eddy energy and wave activity flux are transported to mid and high latitudes. 

［6］This will then benefit the development of the storm track in northeastern Europe. 

［7］Conversely, when downward SHF anomalies prevail in DJ, the decreased heat flux and suppressed eddy energy hinder the growth of the storm track during DJ over the Barents Sea and Europe. 

评论：the growth of the storm track？是the growth of the storm track intensity？

［8］Through the eddy–mean flow interaction, the strengthened (weakened) storm track activities induce decreased (increased) Ural blockings and accelerated (decelerated) westerlies, which makes the cold air from the Arctic inhibited (transported) over the Siberian area. 

［9］评论：which makes the cold air from the Arctic inhibited (transported) over the Siberian area. 

这里不需要make＋verb。可以用which inhibited (transported) the cold air from the Arctic over the Siberian area. 

［10］     Therefore, a weaker (stronger) SH in November (DJ) occurs downstream. 

评论：我会用（in DJ）。

［11］     Moreover, anomalously large snowfall may intensify the SH in DJ rather than in November. 

［12］     The ensemble-mean results from the CMIP5 historical simulations further confirm these connections. 

评论：删掉further。

［13］     The different responses to Arctic sea ice anomalies in early and middle winter set this study apart from earlier ones.

评论： early- and mid-winter更加常见。apart from earlier ones有点太溜了。

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