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科技英语写作基础(系列):阅读摘要on atmospheric cold pools

已有 967 次阅读 2021-7-13 06:39 |个人分类:Scientific Writing|系统分类:论文交流


The goal is to learn how to write better.

分析的目的是为了提高科技英语写作水平(不是针对作者)。

Green highlight is used to show good writing.

绿色: 好好学习。

Yellow means "questionable."

黄色:有问题。

Blue is for discussion.

蓝色: 值得讨论。

Cold Pools Observed by Uncrewed Surface Vehicles in the Central and Eastern Tropical Pacific

评论:大洋,一般需要“the”(虽然在标题中可以省略)。

equatorial Pacific 一样,tropical Pacific的定语central,eastern,or western 应该放在前面(不要“夹”在这两个词的中间—一个常见的“错”)。

 

https://agupubs.onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/10.1029/2021GL093373

 

New in situ observations collected by Saildrones, a novel uncrewed surface vehicle (USV), are used to investigate atmospheric cold pools during three 6-month missions to the central and eastern (140°W–125°W) tropical Pacific. 

评论:句子虽然长,意思非常清楚。

 

Cold pool fronts in the atmospheric boundary layer are identified by a 1.5°C air temperature drop occurring in 10 min or less. 

 

While cold pool events were observed in the central Pacific as far north as 30°N and within the equatorial band, the majority of observed cold pools occurred within the convective, low-wind shear environment of the Intertropical Convergence Zone. 

评论:这个连接号,加与不加,意思有点不一样。

 

Composite time series analysis of measurements during the 382 cold pool events reveals new insights on high-frequency variations in air temperature, wind speed, humidity, pressure, and sea surface temperature and salinity associated with cold pool fronts. 

评论:这个and没有错,但是不用也可以。

 

The results highlight the unique capabilities of Saildrone USVs to resolve small spatial and temporal scales of variability over observationally sparse ocean regions.

 

评论:我会用observation-sparse。

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