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科技英语写作基础(系列):阅读摘要overturning circulation

已有 682 次阅读 2020-11-1 07:11 |个人分类:Scientific Writing|系统分类:论文交流| 科技英语写作

The goal is to learn how to write better.

分析的目的是为了提高科技英语写作水平(不是针对作者)

Green highlight is used to show good writing.

绿色好好学习。

Yellow means "questionable."

黄色:有问题。

Blue is for discussion.

蓝色值得讨论。

Weakening Atlantic overturning circulation causes South Atlantic salinity pile-up

https://www.nature.com/articles/s41558-020-0897-7?utm_source=nclimate_etoc&utm_medium=email&utm_campaign=toc_41558_10_11&utm_content=20201031&sap-outbound-id=FFD0A2430D5B4BDFC6A8A19CB4B122A7308BE0EF

 

The Atlantic Meridional Overturning Circulation (AMOC) is an active component of the Earth’s climate system1 and its response to global warming is of critical importance tosociety. 

评论:这两部分,中间应该用“,and”。

 

Climate models have shown an AMOC slowdown under anthropogenic warming since the industrial revolution2,3,4, but this slowdown has been difficult to detect in the short observational record5,6,7,8,9,10 because of substantial interdecadal climate variability

 

This has led to the indirect detection of the slowdown from longer-term fingerprints11,12,13,14 such as the subpolar North Atlantic ‘warming hole’11

评论:英式英语。

 

However, these fingerprints, which exhibit some uncertainties15, are all local indicators of AMOC slowdown around the subpolar North Atlantic. 

 

Here we show observational and modelling evidence of a remote indicator of AMOC slowdown outside the North Atlantic

评论:evidence不带s

 

Under global warming, the weakening AMOC reduces the salinity divergence and then leads to a ‘salinity pile-up’ remotely in the South Atlantic. 

评论:可以不要thethen

 

This evidence is consistent with the AMOC slowdown under anthropogenic warming and, furthermore, suggests that this weakening has likely occurred all the way into the South Atlantic.

 

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