我常常改海洋、气象、气候研究的文章。今天斗胆分析一篇离我的专业较远的摘要。

Super sensitivity and super resolution with quantum teleportation

https://www.nature.com/articles/s41534-019-0132-4

[1] We propose a method for quantum enhanced phase estimation based on continuous variable (CV) quantum teleportation. 

评论：这里没有必要定义缩写CV，因为后面一共才用了一次。（一般是用三次缩写，才值得定义。）

用quantum-enhanced？

[2] The phase shift probed by a coherent state can be enhanced by repeatedly teleporting the state back to interact with the phase shift again using a supply of two-mode squeezed vacuum states. 

评论：我太外行，不知道two-mode是否应该是two mode，因为后面有states。

[3] In this way a sequential protocol exhibiting both super-resolution and super-sensitivity can be obtained due to the coherent addition of the phase shift. 

评论：In this way后面加个逗号吧？我不太喜欢这里的due to。

[4] The protocol enables Heisenberg-limited sensitivity and super-resolution given sufficiently strong squeezing. 

评论：感觉Heisenberg-limited sensitivity应该是Heisenberg-limited-sensitivity。

[5] The proposed method could be implemented with current or near-term technology of CV teleportation.

评论：could有点太“娘娘腔”（弱）？