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如何写好科技英语300字短文:Part I (Feb 3,2019)

已有 3772 次阅读 2019-2-4 14:07 |个人分类:Scientific Writing|系统分类:教学心得| 科技英语写作

讲课用的textbook: College Writing Skills with Readings, Ninth Edition (美国大学英语写作第九版) by John Langan (available on jd for less than RMB70)

这是一本不需要老师就可以自学的教科书。才两杯星巴克咖啡的价格。(我一般不光顾中国的星巴克。)

没有教科书,你只是路过看热闹。(就像我路过中国的星巴克。)

You can get a free copy for the 7th edition:
https://blaw05.files.wordpress.com/2015/10/english-skills-with-readings-7th-edition.pdf

but it is a very old version.

 

Part I: Essay Writing (如何写短文)

Chapter 5: The Fourth Step in Essay Writing

This chapter will show you how to

·      revise so that your sentences flow smoothly and clearly

·      edit so that your sentences are error free

 

我讲写作课时一直强调:好文章是改出来的。其中包括改句子。

Revising Sentences

The following strategies will help you to revise your sentences effectively. 

1.       Use parallelism. 

2.       Use a consistent point of view. 

3.       Use specific words. 

4.       Use concise wording. 

5.       Vary your sentences. 

Use Parallelism (p107 on 9thedition, p124 on 7thedition)

Nonparallel (Not Balanced) 

I resolved to lose weight, to study more, and watching less TV. 

Parallel (Balanced) 

I resolved to lose weight, to study more, and to watch less TV. (A balanced series of to verbs: to lose, to study, to watch)

 

More examples are given in the book.

 

Use a Consistent Point of View 

Consistency with Verbs 

Do not shift verb tenses unnecessarily. 

If you begin writing a paper in the present tense, don’t shift suddenly to the past. 

If you begin in the past, don’t shift without reason to the present. 

 

Consistency with Pronouns 

Do not shift point of view unnecessarily. When writing a paper, be consistent in your use of first-, second-, or third-person pronouns. 

上面这些,也是我润色时会关注的。

 

Use Specific Words 

To be an effective writer, you must use specific words rather than general words. Specific words create pictures in the reader’s mind. They help capture interest and make your meaning clear. 

 

Use Active Verbs

Even for research papers, use active voice when you can.

 

Use Concise Wording 

Wordiness—using more words than necessary to express a meaning—is often a sign of lazy or careless writing. 

 

Here are two examples of wordy sentences:

Anne is of the opinion that the death penalty should be allowed. 

I would like to say that my subject in this paper will be the kind of generous person that my father was. 

 

Omitting needless words improves the sentences: 

Anne supports the death penalty. 

My father was a generous person.

 

Vary Your Sentences 

One aspect of effective writing is to vary your sentences. If every sentence follows the same pattern, writing may become monotonous. 

We will go into details on this tomorrow.

 

今天就讲这些。有问题,请留言。

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